Next time I’ll do everything perfectly.
24/11/2019
Just imagine
That all that light was illumination
The dance of time, no hesitation
To weave our souls into
A tapestry of life so true
That all the pain is washed away
With a perfect kiss on a perfect day
Golden ribbons on the best surprise
Of no regrets til the day I die
Because I loved one so fair
That nothing could budge my desire
To smell the soft scent of her hair
An endless flame then a wild fire
So our souls float on
Through time and space
Til they collide
An explosion of harmony
The ultimate answer
To the meaning of life
That we shared love
The best thing in this life
As we watch the stars up above
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I don’t do a lot of rhyming stuff but this one felt right. The girl it was meant for is no longer in my life and I’m at peace with that. In the book 1984 the love of the protagonist is the last thing to fall as the horror of his life unfolds, for me no matter how hard life got I never lost sight of the passion I had for this remarkable woman and it’s easy in some ways knowing that she will be happier without me.
Next time I’ll do everything perfectly and never lose the next great love of my life
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Beautifully evoked lyrically delightful and skillfully crafted poem
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Beautiful poem, Christo! Very expressive and well-written.
In my life, love remains even when we have parted ways, even when someone has died…always. Take care. Cheryl
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Love is possibly the best part of life for many, I’ll love that woman til I die even she can’t be mine. All the best, take care.
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